Title: Will Work For Food
Tagline: How can I be sure the needy
will use my help wisely?
Summary: There are two characters in
this story. We meet a woman in her young twenties, in the midst of
her daily morning rush. She comes across a homeless man asking for
food, but she lies and says doesn’t have anything. She goes to get
her daily coffee, and decides to pick something up to give to the
homeless man on her way to the office. He takes the charity, and as
she walks away, we discover something about the man that we wish we
didn’t.
This is a great set up and it's good copy to entice someone to see a film. However, when you develop a concept you need to give away the surprise endings.
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